ahh just nailed it! When char talked to Blake's brother and his sarcastic answer of Blake knowing the way to Acker company was just so good...Liked it a lit
~Reader From MTN Community
2021-04-23
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SAN{MTN}
The story and chapter is well going, I can tell how much effort you did in it as it's a novel.And I think by seeing your writing skill that story will end in a positive and quite good way. I also analysed that story was anyhow co-related with the idea was chose. There are little typing errors once it's fixed the story will more good and smooth for readers to read. ~Readers From MTN Community.
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☆Gauri☆MTNp☆Inf☆
ahh just nailed it! When char talked to Blake's brother and his sarcastic answer of Blake knowing the way to Acker company was just so good...Liked it a lit
~Reader From MTN Community
2021-04-23
1
SAN{MTN}
The story and chapter is well going, I can tell how much effort you did in it as it's a novel.And I think by seeing your writing skill that story will end in a positive and quite good way. I also analysed that story was anyhow co-related with the idea was chose. There are little typing errors once it's fixed the story will more good and smooth for readers to read.
~Readers From MTN Community.
2021-04-23
1