The story is interesting and I feel it. Your writing is awesome. The way you describe the characters and the situation reminds me of the novels which I read and I mean the real book novels. Hope you keep it up and do ur best. I feel excited to read further. I also hope u rectify your spellings and put the punctuations in the correct places. Overall everything is good.
~Reader from MTN Community.
2021-01-08
1
☆Gauri☆MTNp☆Inf☆
The story is going well and getting more interesting qnd I kind of feel addicted to it....We can easily get a grip of characters of the story by now...It's good overall but the thing you have to improve is your explaining of the scenes...You literally don't go well with explaining in a good way sometimes...Like changing of scenes sometimes make a confusion so just try to solve this issue and overall the story is good and interesting.
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Ava💕<MTN>
The story is interesting and I feel it. Your writing is awesome. The way you describe the characters and the situation reminds me of the novels which I read and I mean the real book novels. Hope you keep it up and do ur best. I feel excited to read further. I also hope u rectify your spellings and put the punctuations in the correct places. Overall everything is good.
~Reader from MTN Community.
2021-01-08
1
☆Gauri☆MTNp☆Inf☆
The story is going well and getting more interesting qnd I kind of feel addicted to it....We can easily get a grip of characters of the story by now...It's good overall but the thing you have to improve is your explaining of the scenes...You literally don't go well with explaining in a good way sometimes...Like changing of scenes sometimes make a confusion so just try to solve this issue and overall the story is good and interesting.
~~~Reader From MTN community
2021-01-08
1