The storyline is pretty good and lively. I feel everything as real and I enjoy it. But you still have some mistakes like commas and fullstops at wrong places. If not, everything else is fine. Your explanations sometimes and somewhere lacks, but everything else is fine.
~Reader from MTN Community.
2021-01-08
1
☆Gauri☆MTNp☆Inf☆
The story is getting interesting and I like the way it's going. There isn't any typing mistakes and the sentence are clear enough to understand but sometimes the explanation of the situation or the words or the terms u want to tell your readers Don't go well like you told that she is Esp and you didn't gave any note in between or after te chapter about the meaning of ESP...So my point is what if any reader Don't know about the meaning of ESP.?...So just try to elaborate about the terms you are telling in the story and make readers understand each and every point of your story.
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Ava💕<MTN>
The storyline is pretty good and lively. I feel everything as real and I enjoy it. But you still have some mistakes like commas and fullstops at wrong places. If not, everything else is fine. Your explanations sometimes and somewhere lacks, but everything else is fine.
~Reader from MTN Community.
2021-01-08
1
☆Gauri☆MTNp☆Inf☆
The story is getting interesting and I like the way it's going. There isn't any typing mistakes and the sentence are clear enough to understand but sometimes the explanation of the situation or the words or the terms u want to tell your readers Don't go well like you told that she is Esp and you didn't gave any note in between or after te chapter about the meaning of ESP...So my point is what if any reader Don't know about the meaning of ESP.?...So just try to elaborate about the terms you are telling in the story and make readers understand each and every point of your story.
~~~Reader From MTN community
2021-01-08
1