There are some mistakes in writing....Try to avoid them in future..It'll improve your writing skills more and make the stpry more interesting to read
~~Reader From MTN Community
2021-02-09
1
Adi[MTN]
Chapters are fine but little improvement required as previously, it was well going but now In some chapters Few errors are there try to fix it. And make little more twisting in story which will make little excitement curious to read what gonna happen next. But yeah story is really fascinating. Once small errors are fixed. ~Readers From MTN Community.
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☆Gauri☆MTNp☆Inf☆
There are some mistakes in writing....Try to avoid them in future..It'll improve your writing skills more and make the stpry more interesting to read
~~Reader From MTN Community
2021-02-09
1
Adi[MTN]
Chapters are fine but little improvement required as previously, it was well going but now In some chapters Few errors are there try to fix it. And make little more twisting in story which will make little excitement curious to read what gonna happen next. But yeah story is really fascinating. Once small errors are fixed.
~Readers From MTN Community.
2021-02-02
1