ok so the story is good but cheesy and the lines are so awkward. I mean it's feels so like picked up lines. but...yeah I do love the story . except that the fl fell in love so quickly and didn't even say it before. I mean like my heart beat so fast or other don't know. it just everything goes so quickly that even started to get confused. and there's a lot more i want to say but I'll stop here . anyway the plot is good not bad keep up
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Fatima ezzahrae Ramadane
ok so the story is good but cheesy and the lines are so awkward. I mean it's feels so like picked up lines. but...yeah I do love the story . except that the fl fell in love so quickly and didn't even say it before. I mean like my heart beat so fast or other don't know. it just everything goes so quickly that even started to get confused. and there's a lot more i want to say but I'll stop here . anyway the plot is good not bad keep up
2022-04-19
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私はルナです❤︎
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2022-02-15
0