story doesn’t feel realistic. Someone who has gone through trauma or abuse wouldn’t trust a stranger so easily or ask to go home with them. The instant adoption and romantic feelings make it seem forced. You should show the emotional recovery and gradual trust first otherwise, it loses believability.
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lovetorry
story doesn’t feel realistic. Someone who has gone through trauma or abuse wouldn’t trust a stranger so easily or ask to go home with them. The instant adoption and romantic feelings make it seem forced. You should show the emotional recovery and gradual trust first otherwise, it loses believability.
2025-10-08
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KIRIN#
Yeah yeah, YOUR Hyung!!
2025-08-14
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izumi..
boiled/Chuckle//Chuckle/but why hmmmm😆😆
2025-10-01
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