Crimson Vows
(The streets of New Seoul are slick with recent rain. Neon signs flicker in the distance, casting reflections on cobbled alleyways. The sound of distant jazz echoes from a club nearby. It's midnight.)
[Narration — Soft gray tone with ink-brushed city]
The city that never sleeps — not when its queen is awake.
[A tall figure stepping out of a luxury car. Long wolf-cut hair tied loosely, a sleek black suit hugging her toned frame. A cigarette hangs from her lip. Cold eyes scan the street.]
Dahlia (Ren): (coldly, to her bodyguard Mira)
“Make sure nobody follows us. I don’t like being watched.”
Mira: (glancing behind)
“Yes, Boss. Eyes everywhere these days. Even in the rain.”
(They step into an underground speakeasy, filled with shadows and whispers. At the far end, a girl in a flowery frock is playing piano softly — a sweet, innocent melody among thugs and secrets.)
She didn’t belong there. That was her danger… and her charm.
[ Hana’s face — warm smile, chubby cheeks, long soft hair bouncing as she plays. A pink glow outlines her as if she's from another world.]
Hana (softly, to herself):
“Maybe if I play it softer… She’ll remember me.”
(Dahlia notices her — her cigarette pauses halfway. Her breath catches. The melody hits a memory.)
[Flashback in pale ink — a younger Dahlia watching a girl run through a field of sunflowers. The tune was the same.]
Dahlia (muttering):
“…That song…”
“Ooh... I was trapped in the night, when suddenly—like summer breeze on my skin—she touched my world... and everything began to...”
Mira (tense): Trying to confront Dahlia
“Are you okay?”
Dahlia:
“Leave us. Don’t let anyone in.”
Mira (irritated grits her teeth and muttering):
TCH! Again her ...
Mira (Trying to stop Dahlia):
But Ren _
Dahlia (angrily )
LEAVE!
Mira (taking few steps back):
yes
(She walks slowly to the piano. Hana looks up, surprised but calm.)
Hana (smiling):
“You smell like gunpowder and rain.”
Dahlia (pausing, then smirking):
“You talk like you have a death wish.”
[Narration — her heart begins to thaw, in silent pulses]
That was the first time Dahlia didn’t give the order to shoot.
(The speakeasy is quiet except for the gentle hum of Hana’s final notes. Outside, thunder rolls. Inside, a storm brews silently between two fates about to intertwine.)
[Hana’s soft expression, contrasted with Dahlia’s sharp, unreadable face. Their eyes lock. One holds curiosity, the other command.]
Hana (tilting her head playfully):
“So... mafia boss or just someone with really good fashion taste?”
Dahlia (light scoff):
“I don’t do small talk with strangers.”
Hana (smiling wider):
“Then make me not a stranger.”
[Panel — Mira outside the door, tense. She speaks into an earpiece.]
Mira:
“Dahlia’s still inside with the civilian. Do we intervene?”
Voice on comm (deep, male):
“Negative. Let her play. The girl’s clean. But keep eyes on entrances.”
[Scene shift — A warehouse rooftop under the same stormy sky. A new character watches from afar.]
[Enter Blossom — short silver hair under a black beret, trench coat fluttering in the wind. She sips from a thermos.]
Blossom (dryly):
“Well, well... our queen found a new flower.”
[From behind, another voice — sweet but steely.]
Evenie:
“Think it’s just a crush or something fatal?”
(Evenie, Hana’s childhood best friend, steps beside her — leather jacket, short bob, clutching a camera with a zoom lens.)
Blossom (smirking):
“Depends on who picks the petals first.”
[Narration]
Not everyone watches to protect. Some just want to see how long a match burns before it dies.
[Scene returns to speakeasy. Hana closes the piano. Stands. Walks to Dahlia — barely an inch between them.]
Hana:
“I know who you are, Dahlia.”
Dahlia (coldly):
“Then why aren’t you afraid?”
Hana (softly):
“Because I know you won't hurt me.”
[ Dahlia’s mask cracks for a split second. Her lips part. But suddenly—]
BANG!
(A bullet shatters the ceiling lamp. Screams erupt.)
Mira (bursting in):
“Boss! MOVE!”
[ Chaos. Mira shields Dahlia. Hana pulled behind the piano.]
Dahlia (shouting):
“Who the hell—?!”
[Enter D.U. — lean, fast, dressed in red, eyes wild with adrenaline.]
D.U. (grinning):
“Sorry for the party crash. Mary sends her love.”
[Narration — Thunder claps above.]
And just like that, the first petal of peace was torn by a storm they didn’t see coming.
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