MANGA CHAPTER 1: “Awakening of Eron”
Series Title: The Fallen God: Eron's Rebirth
Genre: Sci-fi x Fantasy x Reincarnation x Mystery
Format: Traditional manga layout (Right-to-left or Left-to-right, your choice)
PAGE 1: INTRO PANEL (FULL PAGE)
[Visual]
A silent black starry sky. In the center, a shattered divine statue floats in space—half buried in cosmic dust.
[Text (Narration)]
"When the gods disappeared, silence reigned across the stars. But silence... is not peace."
PAGE 2
PANEL 1 – Close-up: A futuristic glass city crumbles as warships burn in the sky.
[Text]
Earth, Year 9001. The final war... before the fall.
PANEL 2 – Eron (20, handsome, dressed like royalty) stands on a tall balcony, smiling.
[Narration/Thoughts (Eron)]
"Born into luxury. Raised by algorithms. Killed by betrayal."
PANEL 3 – A masked figure stabs him in the back.
SFX: SHHK!
[Eron’s dialogue, fading]:
“Heh… you finally did it.”
PAGE 3
PANEL 1 – Eron’s eyes open in a new body. He’s in a poor village, lying on the ground in dirt.
SFX: Gasp!
[Text/Narration:]
“You have been gifted one last life...”
PANEL 2 – A boy (young Eron from this timeline) stares at him.
Boy’s Dialogue:
“You’re awake, stranger.”
PANEL 3 – Eron tries to stand but collapses under the intense sunlight.
SFX: THUD
Boy’s Dialogue (worried):
“Hey! Are you okay?!”
PAGE 4
PANEL 1 – Vision blurs. Eron hears a voice in his head.
[System (AI Textbox)]:
“Initializing hidden gift… activating failsafe.”
PANEL 2 – Golden aura surrounds Eron as his body stabilizes.
SFX: WHRRRRRRR
[Eron's Thoughts]:
“What is this feeling? Energy… unlike anything before…”
PANEL 3 – The boy helps him up. Eron finally speaks.
Eron:
“Thanks... What’s your name?”
PANEL 4 – The boy smiles.
Boy:
“Eron. And you?”
PANEL 5 – Eron smirks.
Eron (smiling):
“...Eron.”
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CHAPTER 1 (CONTINUED)
Title: “Awakening of Eron”
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PAGE 5
PANEL 1 – Eron walks slowly beside the young boy through the dusty village path. His eyes scan the strange, ancient world.
[Eron (thinking)]:
> “This isn’t Earth… at least, not the one I knew. It feels like the past, but something is off...”
PANEL 2 – Villagers watch him from a distance, whispering.
Villager 1 (whispers):
> “That outsider… his eyes glow like lightning.”
Villager 2:
“He appeared out of nowhere. Cursed?”
PANEL 3 – The boy offers a waterskin.
Boy (cheerfully):
> “Drink! You look like you saw a god!”
Eron (smirks):
“Maybe I did. Maybe I was one.”
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PAGE 6
PANEL 1 – Wide shot of the village: mud huts, strange dinosaur-like creatures pulling carts, and a bazaar in the distance.
[Eron (thinking)]:
> “Dino beasts. No trace of tech. But the system still works...”
PANEL 2 – Close-up: A flickering hologram appears in Eron’s vision.
[SYSTEM]:
> “Power Core: Dormant.
Skill Tree: Locked.
Directive: Remain hidden. Survive.”
PANEL 3 – Eron narrows his eyes.
Eron (thinking):
> “Why send me here…? Who gave me this power? It wasn’t random…”
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PAGE 7
PANEL 1 – At the boy’s small house: a quiet hut near the forest edge.
Boy:
> “You can stay here tonight. My sister will be home soon.”
Eron (raising an eyebrow):
“Sister?”
PANEL 2 – Eron looks around the room: hunting tools, old scrolls, dried meat, and a broken blade with futuristic carvings.
[Eron (thinking)]:
> “That blade… no way… it’s from the future.”
PANEL 3 – He picks up the blade. As he touches it, a brief flashback shows the same blade glowing in his past life — a god-killer weapon.
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PAGE 8
PANEL 1 – Sudden BOOM! The door opens.
A tall, fierce woman enters — the boy’s sister, dressed in light armor, with a confident smirk and piercing eyes.
Sister:
> “Who’s this half-dead pretty boy in our house?”
PANEL 2 – Eron looks up, amused.
Eron:
> “Name’s Eron. Guess I’m your guest.”
Sister (suspicious):
“Tch. Just don’t touch my weapons.”
PANEL 3 – The boy introduces them.
Boy:
> “Sis, this is Eron. He collapsed outside. He’s nice!”
Sister (low voice):
“Nice guys are the worst.”
PANEL 4 – She eyes him intensely.
Sister (thinking):
> “There’s something off about this one…”
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