you literally have twelve dialogues and 30 monologues in the chapter and all of them are too short only adding the simple important details without any extra discription it's so short so simple for people to get engaged in such a short chapter so do better work on your story exceed the length of your chapter and not the chapter numbers
2025-05-26
1
ABN22
I would like to comment, Authy....But sometimes l forget it...I will try to put comment as well as like your stories without fail from now on...And Thank you very much for the frequent updates, Authy...
2025-05-25
4
jeonkook🖤
sorry for being a silent reader. authy, but I love your stories. Gosh, you are so good at writing. I love your stories. 💜 please update author. thank you for writing an amazing story lotes of love ❤️
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~𝕮𝖗𝖎𝖓𝖌𝖊𝖞 𝖘𝖖𝖚𝖎𝖗𝖗𝖞
you literally have twelve dialogues and 30 monologues in the chapter and all of them are too short only adding the simple important details without any extra discription it's so short so simple for people to get engaged in such a short chapter so do better work on your story exceed the length of your chapter and not the chapter numbers
2025-05-26
1
ABN22
I would like to comment, Authy....But sometimes l forget it...I will try to put comment as well as like your stories without fail from now on...And Thank you very much for the frequent updates, Authy...
2025-05-25
4
jeonkook🖤
sorry for being a silent reader. authy, but I love your stories. Gosh, you are so good at writing. I love your stories. 💜 please update author. thank you for writing an amazing story lotes of love ❤️
2025-05-25
1