why does chapters tone sound off. Like too much repetitive content and too formal dialogues. And the characters are so confusing, especially tae. One moment he was using all concubines as tool, another moment he fell for jungkook even after saying not to expect love from him then he's also thinking of replacing jungkook with another concubine if he fails to be pregnant then he acts upright and call jungkook "his omega". This man is having too many mood swings. Theirs no fixed pattern of plot. This book had potential but execution isn't 10/10.
2025-07-06
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Erica
I am waiting for some kind of twist? Idk is kookie really that naive as everyone assumes him to be? 👀
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Daisy🌼
why does chapters tone sound off. Like too much repetitive content and too formal dialogues. And the characters are so confusing, especially tae. One moment he was using all concubines as tool, another moment he fell for jungkook even after saying not to expect love from him then he's also thinking of replacing jungkook with another concubine if he fails to be pregnant then he acts upright and call jungkook "his omega". This man is having too many mood swings. Theirs no fixed pattern of plot. This book had potential but execution isn't 10/10.
2025-07-06
1
Erica
I am waiting for some kind of twist? Idk is kookie really that naive as everyone assumes him to be? 👀
2025-05-14
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Joy D
Yeash! /Determined/ Let's Go- Let's Go- Let's Gooo~ /Smirk//Rose/
2025-05-14
1