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Buraddi Rōtasu — Episode 2: "Fall Down Seven Times, Stand Up Eight" 🥊🌸
Ren collapsed to the ground, fists bloodied, body trembling 🩸.
He had barely knocked down a leaf last night, but now he could barely even move.
Jun walked over, hands in his pockets, and looked down at him.
"That's enough, kid. Go home. Come back tomorrow," Jun said, a half-smile on his face. "School’s out tomorrow — it's Saturday.
No excuses. Be ready."
Ren nodded weakly and limped his way back home under the streetlights 🌃.
At home, Yui Asahi heard the front door creak open 🚪.
She turned around and gasped when she saw Ren’s swollen face, bruised hands, and battered arms 😱.
"REN! What happened to you?!"
Ren dropped his schoolbag and sat down at the table, breathing heavily.
"Mom... I’m gonna become a bare-knuckle boxer," he said, voice shaky but determined.
"Like Dad."
Yui froze. Her eyes clouded with sadness. 🌧️
"Your father... Daisuke Suzuki... once dreamed that same dream," she said softly.
"But look where it got us, Ren.
He became a champion, yes... but he left me.
He left you.
And somewhere out there... is a child he doesn’t even know about."
Yui’s voice cracked.
"Promise me, Ren.
If you ever have a child, a woman... don't ever abandon them like he did." 💔
Ren clenched his fists, then relaxed and smiled softly.
"I swear, Mom.
That’s never gonna happen. Never." 🤞
He laid his head gently on Yui’s lap. She stroked his hair 🌸.
Ren slowly drifted into sleep, hearing his mother's heartbeat, feeling peace he hadn’t known in a long time.
🌄 The next morning...
Ren woke up early.
He dressed differently today — wearing fighting shorts, and he wrapped Kinesio white tape around both his fists and legs 🩹🥊, just like a real fighter.
His reflection in the mirror looked different now.
More determined.
More alive. 🔥
He headed straight to Kobushi Boubi.
When Ren arrived, the gym felt empty.
No Jun.
Instead, Master Fuji was waiting, arms crossed, glaring like a statue 🧱.
"You came back. Good.
If you wanna earn your spot here," Fuji said, cracking his knuckles, "then fight."
Ren nodded.
Suddenly, another boy stepped forward.
His name was Yamato.
Yamato was about Ren’s size — maybe a bit taller — with sharp eyes and thick arms.
He was a rookie, but even rookies here were strong. 💥
"Yamato will be your opponent."
⚡ Fight: Ren vs Yamato Begins!
The bell rings. 🛎️
Yamato wastes no time — charging straight at Ren, landing a heavy body shot.
Ren flies back, gasping for air. 🥴
Ren gets back up, barely standing.
Yamato steps forward again, this time smashing a punch into Ren’s face —
Ren falls down. 🩸
Blood trickles from Ren’s nose.
But he stands up again.
Yamato fakes a left jab, then slams a right hook into Ren’s eye — 💥
Ren stumbles back, his right eye swelling up badly. 🥶
(Yamato mutters: "Stay down, idiot...")
But Ren refuses.
He wipes the blood from his mouth and smiles weakly.
They keep exchanging blows.
Ren manages a few punches — but Yamato’s hits are heavier, faster, sharper.
In the final exchange —
Both fighters swing at the same time — a perfect collision 💥💥.
Yamato’s punch barely shakes him.
But Ren’s head snaps back —
He collapses to the ground, blood spraying from his mouth 🩸.
Jun suddenly bursts through the door 😨.
"REN!!"
He picks up Ren, who is unconscious but breathing faintly.
Jun carries him like a brother through the streets, sprinting for home 🏃♂️🏠.
When they arrive, Yui screams when she sees Ren's broken body.
"REN!! CALL AN AMBULANCE!!" 🚑
At the hospital... 🏥
The doctors rush Ren into emergency care.
His injuries are rough — a cracked rib, a badly swollen eye, dehydration, and internal bleeding in the mouth.
He lies in bed, hooked up to IVs 💉.
Jun sits quietly outside the room, head in his hands.
Yui sobs quietly, watching her son fight to breathe.
🌙 That night, the doctors confirm:
Ren's eye is safe — it was only a heavy bruise, not permanent damage 🙏.
But Ren will need a few weeks of recovery.
🌸 [End of Episode 2]
Next Episode preview if you want:
👉 Ren wakes up.
Fuji and Jun come visit him in the hospital — and Master Fuji offers Ren an official place at Kobushi Boubi Gym once he recovers...
But Yamato also comes to apologize.
Do you want me to also write the "Next Episode 3" properly? 🔥🥊
(Where Ren wakes up, gets real mentorship, and begins his true training arc? 🐉)
It'll be powerful. 🚀
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