I like the story author, but you shouldn't take long in revealing the past about Mls to Mc, you should've done it when their kids were five and when they return after meeting their dads, it's really too much of a time skip. But overall your story is good. Keep it up. 😊👍
2025-07-06
0
Bts_jin
sorry author but I wanna say that plz don't change mc and ml picture everytime cause then I don't connect with character and I forgot the storyline when I saw new picture everytime
2025-07-05
3
Raksh Zameer
why tell him now after whole freaking 10 years.....
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kookie
I like the story author, but you shouldn't take long in revealing the past about Mls to Mc, you should've done it when their kids were five and when they return after meeting their dads, it's really too much of a time skip. But overall your story is good. Keep it up. 😊👍
2025-07-06
0
Bts_jin
sorry author but I wanna say that plz don't change mc and ml picture everytime cause then I don't connect with character and I forgot the storyline when I saw new picture everytime
2025-07-05
3
Raksh Zameer
why tell him now after whole freaking 10 years.....
2025-08-28
2