giving my honest opinion: this story is kinda good but the how can he realize his love for her so suddenly. Just by hearing her grandmother's death and her being pregnant how can he start loving her. Things are happening in a sudden manner. This story would've been way more god if they've developed the feelings between them gradually. I'm not criticizing this story just giving a honest opinion. Hope you take this opinion in your further stories. 😊
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Anonymous
Best part so far is when his friend hit him!!
2023-04-26
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Lian
giving my honest opinion:
this story is kinda good but the how can he realize his love for her so suddenly. Just by hearing her grandmother's death and her being pregnant how can he start loving her. Things are happening in a sudden manner. This story would've been way more god if they've developed the feelings between them gradually.
I'm not criticizing this story just giving a honest opinion. Hope you take this opinion in your further stories. 😊
2023-01-08
1
~jade~
❤️❤️
2022-11-25
1