he's not even 20? Author, kim chen is already 19 so shouldn't his elder brother be atleast 20?
i see in lots of chapter such loop holes. Same dialogues being repeated even if the conversation already happened.
Like Jungkook made it clear that he likes taehyung almost 3 times already but after lisa, tae again texted the same thing and insecure that jk doesn't likes him? when jk has made it crystal clear by words and action both?
And you legit made jk a rapist in this book i hope you're aware of it. it doesn't matter from which angle you look, jungkook took advantage of a *drunk* tae. that part is very very very disturbing to accept, if you want this book to be loved and supported by many readers then edit that part. either make both the parties drugged which would be you editing only one chapter. if you're ok with editing many chapters then it's better if Jungkook didn't got physical at all with tae that night. after taehyung pecked jungkook, jk realised that he doesn't have any allergic reactions towards tae and then be would just let him rest seeing his drunk state that's all.
2025-03-26
2
💜🤞🏻Bangtan🤞🏻💜
he was jealous of your brother chen.... yoongi is a completely different person.... 😂🤦🏻♀️
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Daisy
he's not even 20? Author, kim chen is already 19 so shouldn't his elder brother be atleast 20?
i see in lots of chapter such loop holes. Same dialogues being repeated even if the conversation already happened.
Like Jungkook made it clear that he likes taehyung almost 3 times already but after lisa, tae again texted the same thing and insecure that jk doesn't likes him? when jk has made it crystal clear by words and action both?
And you legit made jk a rapist in this book i hope you're aware of it. it doesn't matter from which angle you look, jungkook took advantage of a *drunk* tae. that part is very very very disturbing to accept, if you want this book to be loved and supported by many readers then edit that part. either make both the parties drugged which would be you editing only one chapter. if you're ok with editing many chapters then it's better if Jungkook didn't got physical at all with tae that night. after taehyung pecked jungkook, jk realised that he doesn't have any allergic reactions towards tae and then be would just let him rest seeing his drunk state that's all.
2025-03-26
2
💜🤞🏻Bangtan🤞🏻💜
he was jealous of your brother chen.... yoongi is a completely different person.... 😂🤦🏻♀️
2025-03-29
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blessed by namjesus
surely enough kook knows what on her mind
2025-03-16
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