Well I truly loved it, but I really thought she would do better than that. Oh well maybe in time. But it was a great ambush. Those they kept alive need to be tortured and then put to death because they are really no good and cannot change and that pack needs someone very good at being an alpha at this time and place .
2025-05-17
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Deborah Pool
I would like to suggest that instead of saying that man or that wolf that you use pronouns like she, he, and they. I believe your story would flow much better.
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Gwendolyn Harrison
Well I truly loved it, but I really thought she would do better than that. Oh well maybe in time. But it was a great ambush. Those they kept alive need to be tortured and then put to death because they are really no good and cannot change and that pack needs someone very good at being an alpha at this time and place .
2025-05-17
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Deborah Pool
I would like to suggest that instead of saying that man or that wolf that you use pronouns like she, he, and they. I believe your story would flow much better.
2025-05-18
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Silvia Lett
Love it. It's a good book.
2025-05-17
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