don't mind but the characters'age is too Much like they're almost 40 and behaving like new adults. it doesn't go with story flow. I like the way you write but you're portraying you mc as so weak. and I am sure it's not rebirth?? then at the end how Jungkook is gonna accept them. that's to toxic that much I read it they do very bad with him. multiple affairs and then having happy ending?? 🤌🏻
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sasha~🎀
don't mind but the characters'age is too Much like they're almost 40 and behaving like new adults. it doesn't go with story flow. I like the way you write but you're portraying you mc as so weak. and I am sure it's not rebirth?? then at the end how Jungkook is gonna accept them. that's to toxic that much I read it they do very bad with him. multiple affairs and then having happy ending?? 🤌🏻
2024-11-20
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