Panel 1: (Outside Near the Building Entrance) Esha and Rosè finish their morning walk, laughing as they head toward their hostel building. A cheerful classmate of Rosè, Mick, spots them and waves enthusiastically.
Mick: “Hey, Rosè! We’ve only got three days left before college reopens. Have you finished all your assignments?”
Panel 2: (Rosè Responding) Rosè smiles brightly, feeling accomplished.
Rosè: “Yes! I’ve done it. What about you?”
Panel 3: (Mick’s Excitement) Mick grins, proud of his work.
Mick: “I’ve successfully completed mine too!”
Panel 4: (Rosè Happy for Mick) Rosè beams at Mick, excited for their upcoming break.
Rosè: “Nice! That’s a relief.” we can actually relax now!"
Panel 5: (Mick Planning) Mick leans in, a conspiratorial look on his face.
Mick: “Our classmates are planning to celebrate these last three days. We’re thinking of dinner at a restaurant, like a freshers' party! Everyone’s invited!”
Panel 6: (Esha's Excitement) Esha’s eyes light up with enthusiasm.
Esha: “Woahhh, that sounds exciting! When are we doing it?”
Panel 7: (Mick Replying) Mick nods, clearly thrilled about the plan.
Mick: “Tomorrow night!”
Panel 8: (Kelvin’s Balcony) Meanwhile, Kelvin wakes up and steps out onto his balcony, stretching his arms with a relaxed yawn.
Kelvin (thinking): “Ahhh, yesterday was a tiring day—setting up my things and exploring the new colony... but the highlight? Definitely the girl with the red hair.”
Panel 9: (Kelvin Spots Rosè) Kelvin glances over and sees Rosè at the entrance of her building, laughing and chatting with Mick. His curiosity piques as he observes them.
Panel 10: (Rosè Saying Goodbye) As Rosè says goodbye to Mick, Esha notices Kelvin on his balcony and leans closer to Rosè, whispering.
Esha: “Hey, Rosè... look up there, Mr. Grey Hair!”
Panel 11: (Rosè Casually Looking Up) Rosè casually glances at Kelvin’s balcony, where he pretends to be preoccupied with something else, but their eyes briefly meet.
Panel 12: (Rosè and Kelvin’s Eye Contact) Their eye contact is fleeting but charged with unspoken emotions. Kelvin looks away, maintaining a casual demeanor.
Panel 13: (Rosè Wondering) Rosè watches Kelvin for a moment, then turns back to Esha with a curious expression.
Rosè: “Will he be coming tomorrow? What class is he in? Maybe he’s from mine?”
Here’s the revised comic panel layout with the change where Kelvin's roommate waves to Rosè:
Panel 14: (Rosè and Esha in Their Room) Rosè and Esha walk into their room after their morning routine. Rosè is still thinking about Kelvin.
Rosè: “Will he be coming tomorrow? What class is he in?
Panel 15: (Kelvin’s Balcony) Kelvin receives a notification on his phone. The message from his group invites him to dinner, detailing the venue.
Kelvin (reading): “Dinner at the new restaurant! Sounds fun.”
Panel 16: (Kelvin’s Room) Kelvin’s roommate and him head towards their room, excited.
Roommate: “Kelvin! That place has an amazing garden area! We’re going to have a blast with our friends tomorrow!”
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Comments
ladia120
Characters are so well-developed and relatable.
2024-11-04
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