it was nice before but then you start writing long chapter that was also okay but in long chapter there was befaltu dialogues of every character that too repeatedly so it was unnecessary
then you didn't clarify some things Arti mehta father 1st time see FL and the way talked in riddle you didn't solve that
2025-04-17
2
Estella 🌠
l mean it is 241 chapter of their marriage so it is definitely too long but it is good and the way u wrote is so beautifully, her revenge is finally completely by her own l love it ❤️
2025-04-17
0
Estella 🌠
Yes pls keep it going or u can add bonus like avantika sibling love and their baby whatever u wish ❤️
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it was nice before but then you start writing long chapter that was also okay but in long chapter there was befaltu dialogues of every character that too repeatedly so it was unnecessary
then you didn't clarify some things Arti mehta father 1st time see FL and the way talked in riddle you didn't solve that
2025-04-17
2
Estella 🌠
l mean it is 241 chapter of their marriage so it is definitely too long but it is good and the way u wrote is so beautifully, her revenge is finally completely by her own l love it ❤️
2025-04-17
0
Estella 🌠
Yes pls keep it going or u can add bonus like avantika sibling love and their baby whatever u wish ❤️
2025-04-17
0