ur writing and story line is absolutely good ...but also note dragging the story too much will only make the readers to loose their interest...making fl as timid silent girl everything is okay ...but do not drag it . it is just my personal opinion only, hope u take it as a suggestion! Thanks ☺️
2025-01-17
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Samaira
please thoda sa stong banao story ko thoda sa or bohot boring si ho rhi he
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Apoorva A
ur writing and story line is absolutely good ...but also note dragging the story too much will only make the readers to loose their interest...making fl as timid silent girl everything is okay ...but do not drag it . it is just my personal opinion only, hope u take it as a suggestion! Thanks ☺️
2025-01-17
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Samaira
please thoda sa stong banao story ko thoda sa or bohot boring si ho rhi he
2025-01-14
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Rida Muhammad
please, I don't like ml cousin and, her friend
2025-01-14
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