Episode 2: Whispers Of War

EXT. PALACE, GARDENS - MORNING 3

The air is crisp and clean, carrying the scent of freshly mown grass and wildflowers as MELANIE (26) focuses on her target, ready to release the arrow with precision and force.

Her scholarly twin brother, MELANIN, stands nearby, watching with a mix of awe and boredom. He's grown accustomed to Melanie's skill and focus, yet he can't help but feel a sense of admiration and envy for her prowess.

A gentle breeze rustles the leaves of nearby trees, providing a symphony of natural sounds for Melanie to focus on as she fires her bow.

THWACK! THWACK! THWACK!

She hits the BULLSEYE on the target ahead. Her movements are fluid and graceful, almost dancelike, as if she were one with her bow and arrow. Melanin lets out an exasperated sigh.

MELANIN: (mutters) You make it look so easy, Mel. Why can't I ever do that?

Their father, PRINCE MELAS (40s), gives a POLITE APPLAUSE as he emerges from the trees dressed in plain clothing, almost as if he's a commoner among the nobles.

MELAS: (chuckles softly) The answer, my dear boy, lies in the question itself. Your sister strives for perfection in everything she does, while you...

He pauses, considering his words.

MELAS: (continues) You are content with mere competence. She is a force of nature, unyielding, and unstoppable. You, on the other hand, are more like a breeze, capable of moving the hearts of men but easily swayed by the winds of change.

Melanie flushes with pleasure at her father's words, while Melanin scowls and rebels.

MELANIN: I am not easily swayed! I am just as strong and determined as Melanie is!

MELAS: (laughs, amused) Oh, Melanin, you underestimate your own strengths. You have a kind soul that sees the beauty in the world and wisdom beyond your years. You have the ability to bring people together through understanding and compassion. That is no weakness; it is a strength that our people need now more than ever.

Melanie nods in agreement and Melanin flushes with pride as he smiles to his father and sister. However, the moment is quickly shuttered when a MESSENGER rushes over to them, bows deeply, and whispers something in Melas' ear. The prince's demeanor darkens instantly as he listens.

INT. PALACE, THRONE CHAMBER - MORNING 3

The ceiling is painted with the scenes of triumphant battles, while a roaring fireplace warms the room, its hearth inlaid with mosaics depicting nature's beauty. But it is the expressions on the faces of the COURTIERS gathered here that truly catch the eye. They range from shock to disbelief and fear to anger. The source is none other than Jabari, kneeling before the throne, bound in shackles of iron.

The golden throne itself sits empty, save for a single figure: the king Eumelanin himself. His face is etched with lines of weariness, but his posture is straight, his gaze unyielding. Beside him stands his older brother, SUPREME CHANCELLOR EFREM (late-60s), a man of more subtlety and guile than outright force.

JABARI: (trembles slightly) My king, I beg you, hear me out. It is true that I disobeyed your order. However, I did so with the intent of protecting Melania. You see, while on patrol near the Snowcrest border, I stumbled upon a machine they had built. A machine capable of firing hundreds of arrows at a time. I was ambushed by their forces while attempting to destroy it.

EUMELANIN: (slams his fist on the throne) Silence! You dare bring your treachery before me; speak of imaginary machines!

JABARI: (desperately) I speak the truth! The Snowcrest are planning to attack, my king. You must prepare for war.

Efrem, watching the exchange with a knowing smile, decides to speak up.

EFREM: (skeptically) What of your men? Can they verify your claims?

Jabari's eyes dart between the king and the chancellor, his desperation palpable.

JABARI: (sadly) They were lost in the battle, Supreme Chancellor. But I survived, and I am here to warn the crown.

Courtiers exchange worried glances, murmurs of doubt and concern rippling through the hall.

EUMELANIN: (calm but firm) Your loyalty is admirable, Jabari, but the law is clear. Disobedience in the face of the king's order is punishable by death. You shall face execution.

The room goes still; the only sound is the crackling of the fireplace. Melas, who has been quietly observing from the side, steps forward.

MELAS: (calmly) Father, if I may speak...

The king nods solemnly, giving him the floor.

MELAS: If there is truth in Jabari's words, could it not be that he saw a threat we have overlooked? Perhaps you should reconsider. His valor and strategic mind could still be of use should we find ourselves at war. 

The room holds its breath as the king's gaze lingers on Melas, then shifts back to Jabari. His expression is unreadable, but his eyes seem to soften slightly.

EUMELANIN: Very well. Jabari, I will not execute you today. I shall have someone sent to investigate this supposed machine of war then revisit your trial. In the meantime, you will remain in custody. 

JABARI: (gratefully) Thank you, my king.

Jabari's shoulders slump in relief, but he knows his fate is far from certain. As the guards escort him from the chamber, Efrem's gaze lingers on Melas, a hint of something unreadable in his eyes.

INT. PALACE, COUNCIL CHAMBER - DAY 3

The council chamber is a grand room with a long, polished table surrounded by ornate chairs. On the walls, tapestries depict scenes of past great leaders, their eyes seemingly watching the proceedings with a stern gaze.

King Eumelanin sits at the head of the table, his expression a mask of calm despite the turmoil in his heart. His advisors, a mix of OLD AND YOUNG FACES, sit around him, whispering in hushed tones. Efrem flanks him, his hand resting lightly on the hilt of his sword and a smug smile playing on the edge of his lips.

EUMELANIN: (interrupts the whispers)

Enough! The funeral rites for Queen Amisi are complete. We must now turn our attention to the future of our great kingdom.

The room falls silent, with the advisors looking at each other nervously.

MELAS: (breaks the silence) Father, perhaps we should discuss the succession.

Eumelanin nods solemnly, his gaze resting on Melas for a moment too long.

EUMELANIN: (nods slowly) Indeed. Melas, as the eldest and my acknowledged son, it is your right to be crowned heir.

As the room erupts into murmurs of approval, the eyes of Melas' half-brother, PRINCE MELAINO (30s), flash with anger, but he says nothing. The king then holds up a hand for silence.

EUMELANIN: However, before we proceed, there is another matter I wish to address.

He looks over at Efrem, who nods almost imperceptibly.

EUMELANIN: The treachery of Jabari has left us with a weakened western defense. We must ensure that Melania remains secure from all threats, both within and without.

EFREM: Your wisdom is unparalleled, my king. Perhaps it is time to appoint a new military commander for the western regions. One who shares your vision for peace and prosperity.

The advisors nod in agreement, and Melaino looks at his father with hope in his eyes. After a moment's thought.

EUMELANIN: Indeed. I hereby appoint Melas as the new military commander of the western regions. He will oversee the defense of our lands and report directly to me.

Melas's eyes widen in surprise and pride, while Melaino's anger boils over, but he holds it in. He knows better than to question the king's decision.

INT. PALACE, EBONY'S QUARTERS - NOON 3

Ebony occupies the living chamber of her luxurious quarters, her maidservant, LILA (25), gently brushing out her hair. The door opens, and Melaino strides in, his eyes locking onto hers.

EBONY: (carefully) What is it, husband?

Melaino's expression is a tempest of emotions—anger, hurt, and betrayal.

MELAINO: (fuming) Father has made his choice! He has appointed Melas as the military commander of the west, and he wants to make him his heir!

EBONY: (coolly) Do not let anger cloud your judgment my love. Though your brother was raised by Queen Melanesia, he is still an illegitimate son, and the Melanian lords will never accept him as our true king.

Melaino paces the room, his eyes flashing with frustration. After a moment, he turns to Ebony.

MELAINO: But what if father officially crowns him? What if he bypasses me entirely?

EBONY: (stands and approaches) Then we must play our cards carefully. We must find a way to regain the power that is rightfully ours.

The two lock gazes, the unspoken understanding between them as potent as a silent promise.

***END OF THE EPISODE***

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Jeremiah Jade Bertos Baldon

Jeremiah Jade Bertos Baldon

Loving the characters and story development. Keep it up!

2024-09-27

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