. I was left with the feeling that everything they went through came rather from passion than a romantic love. Not even many dates (just one) and while I reached chapter 130..and something, I was so bothered by the fact that: the war could’ve rapped up quickly, as well as a few chapters that describe his depression while leyla was gone, and instead came back, have a battle with the empire, enjoy more outings, even had the kids as a side story and not in the story (which would’ve been so much better to remove his behavior while she was pregnant so his redemption made more sense), so much more. Now it feels that the author ended the story abruptly, they are not even enough chapters to the side story, and we never got to see leyla and Matthias a as loving couple to at least love and atoned for everything they did and went through, if the author only removed all the extra drama, thinks could’ve resumed nicely with them having a more proper ending and a bigger love story. But we’ll, it is what it is, but I read this nonstop because I was so invested and I feel empty.
2025-05-08
2
Valeria
This was beautiful, yet disappointing. Too much tension was built unnecessarily for me. I hated that Riette died but it was a befitting ending for Claudine, she only cared about status and she lost everything in the way of getting it, but then this ongoing war, and the details, the back and forth, it was longer than it should had been, because if you think it clearly, the author wasted more time describing the erotic scenes than giving the couple a more solid relationship to built on
2025-05-08
0
Valeria
People should take notes from marriage of convenience, the author didn’t prolong on the drama more than necessary, let us enjoy the love story more than all the suffering and tangled and aggressive schemes, and it was such a good wrapped up, that you can enjoy the side stories being only about the side characters, instead of needing extra characters because you gave us nothing or so little from the main characters and now you are trying to save that fact by filling all that in 6 more chapters 🫠
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Valeria
. I was left with the feeling that everything they went through came rather from passion than a romantic love. Not even many dates (just one) and while I reached chapter 130..and something, I was so bothered by the fact that: the war could’ve rapped up quickly, as well as a few chapters that describe his depression while leyla was gone, and instead came back, have a battle with the empire, enjoy more outings, even had the kids as a side story and not in the story (which would’ve been so much better to remove his behavior while she was pregnant so his redemption made more sense), so much more. Now it feels that the author ended the story abruptly, they are not even enough chapters to the side story, and we never got to see leyla and Matthias a as loving couple to at least love and atoned for everything they did and went through, if the author only removed all the extra drama, thinks could’ve resumed nicely with them having a more proper ending and a bigger love story. But we’ll, it is what it is, but I read this nonstop because I was so invested and I feel empty.
2025-05-08
2
Valeria
This was beautiful, yet disappointing. Too much tension was built unnecessarily for me. I hated that Riette died but it was a befitting ending for Claudine, she only cared about status and she lost everything in the way of getting it, but then this ongoing war, and the details, the back and forth, it was longer than it should had been, because if you think it clearly, the author wasted more time describing the erotic scenes than giving the couple a more solid relationship to built on
2025-05-08
0
Valeria
People should take notes from marriage of convenience, the author didn’t prolong on the drama more than necessary, let us enjoy the love story more than all the suffering and tangled and aggressive schemes, and it was such a good wrapped up, that you can enjoy the side stories being only about the side characters, instead of needing extra characters because you gave us nothing or so little from the main characters and now you are trying to save that fact by filling all that in 6 more chapters 🫠
2025-05-08
1