bro I'm still crying remembering all those pain he suffered but I also feel pain for Jungkook and V I don't know why but my heart is hurting so much 😭💔 I liked the ending very much and I am happy for the choice he made but I don't know why my heart hurts for the others also 😭😭😭😭
2024-11-26
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Snow Rose
hey author... this story was really soft and interesting.. Although throughout the story there were some illogical instances but they did balance the plot... so all in all the story was enjoyable....
2025-01-28
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Moonlight
A good story 👍 The way Tae handled things is in line with his character.
The things that I didn't like about this story would be the marital r*pe that was normalized and no action was taken against it. It's a heinous crime. Another thing would be how the negative effects on Tae's life are blamed mostly on Jin while Namjoon is barely mentioned. Mother and father play equally important roles in the upbringing of a child. Another thing I wanted to mention was how neglectful Jae was towards the upbringing of JK that he grew up to be such a person and the same goes with his grandkids. Maybe Jae was cold or young or immature or something but there is still something that should have been done. Not totally his fault but the fault of not correcting JK when Jae saw his wrong doing lies with him.
The overall flow of the story is good and it came to a good ending but there are plot holes in the story that need work.
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bro I'm still crying remembering all those pain he suffered but I also feel pain for Jungkook and V I don't know why but my heart is hurting so much 😭💔 I liked the ending very much and I am happy for the choice he made but I don't know why my heart hurts for the others also 😭😭😭😭
2024-11-26
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Snow Rose
hey author...
this story was really soft and interesting.. Although throughout the story there were some illogical instances but they did balance the plot... so all in all the story was enjoyable....
2025-01-28
0
Moonlight
A good story 👍 The way Tae handled things is in line with his character.
The things that I didn't like about this story would be the marital r*pe that was normalized and no action was taken against it. It's a heinous crime. Another thing would be how the negative effects on Tae's life are blamed mostly on Jin while Namjoon is barely mentioned. Mother and father play equally important roles in the upbringing of a child.
Another thing I wanted to mention was how neglectful Jae was towards the upbringing of JK that he grew up to be such a person and the same goes with his grandkids. Maybe Jae was cold or young or immature or something but there is still something that should have been done. Not totally his fault but the fault of not correcting JK when Jae saw his wrong doing lies with him.
The overall flow of the story is good and it came to a good ending but there are plot holes in the story that need work.
Keep working hard Author 🌸
2024-10-08
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