Author I have a suggestion for you. Please include more romantic scenes between Tae and Kook. They are just living a domestic life and later at night they make love but what about hugs, kisses, pecks, teasing, and back hugs? Sharing secret kisses and hugs in the kitchen and then someone catch them or Kook flirting with tae or simply them cuddling together. You don't write these parts which is the only thing i see missing otherwise your story line is very engaging. You don't feel comfortable writing their making love scenes is fine with me, I don't mind it at all but these romance is what makes readers with giddy and enjoy more. Please consider it. 😊
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Uranus tl
it's the best 💜👏😍
2024-09-19
1
Daisy
Author I have a suggestion for you. Please include more romantic scenes between Tae and Kook. They are just living a domestic life and later at night they make love but what about hugs, kisses, pecks, teasing, and back hugs? Sharing secret kisses and hugs in the kitchen and then someone catch them or Kook flirting with tae or simply them cuddling together. You don't write these parts which is the only thing i see missing otherwise your story line is very engaging. You don't feel comfortable writing their making love scenes is fine with me, I don't mind it at all but these romance is what makes readers with giddy and enjoy more. Please consider it. 😊
2024-09-06
1
AV ≛⃝🦅
I don't have a problem even if it is more longer
2024-08-31
2