The Message (Single Edition)
The Unknown inside the house
This is a story consist of two main characters
They both are in relationship for more than 2 years.
The story begins at night, when Cris was coming back from work.
03.26.2023 Mary sends the text to Cris
Mary Phillips
Where are you now?
Cris Scott
I am heading toward home
Mary Phillips
Ohh okay, while coming just bring me some eggs for the dinner
Cris Scott
You didn’t prepared the dinner yet? It’s 9:55pm
Cris Scott
What you were doing at home the whole day???
Mary Phillips
Um, i forget to prepare! Sorry..
Mary Phillips
CRIS! Where are you?
Mary Phillips
It’s already 10:25pm already!
Mary Phillips
You have not arrived yet.
Cris Scott
My car tires flat. Just changed it
Cris Scott
I we’ll be at home soon..
Mary Phillips
Is that you?
Cris Scott
What’re you talking about?
Mary Phillips
You are knocking the door right?
Mary Phillips
I know it’s you
Mary Phillips
You like to play games with me
Cris Scott
But... I’m in my car
Mary Phillips
I’m COMING! Don’t knock the door so hardly, or else it will break. I
Cris Scott
But Mary, I’m not here!
(Mary left her phone on the table)
Mary Phillips
Cris, don’t play games with me
Cris Scott
Why would I play games with you at this time?
Mary Phillips
You were knocking the door straight for a minute!
Mary Phillips
Don’t be so silly guy Cris!
Cris Scott
I’ll be at home in 10 minutes
Mary Phillips
You’re not here already?
Mary Phillips
Than who is at my door
Cris Scott
I’m telling you but you were not listening to me!
Mary Phillips
Oh. I’m sorry
Cris Scott
It’s may be our neighbours’ kid
Cris Scott
He is really naughty. Oh my god he is mad boy
Mary Phillips
May be, you’re right
Mary Phillips
What’s that
Mary Phillips
Someone tried to break our window upstairs!
Mary Phillips
I am going and checking it
Mary Phillips
Wait man, don’t spam the chats!
Mary Phillips
No ones there
Mary Phillips
I hope it’s our neighbours kid!
Cris Scott
How can a 10 years old kind can break a window?
Mary Phillips
You’re right
Mary Phillips
Then, who is in the upstairs?
Mary Phillips
I can listen someone opened the door at the upstairs!
Mary Phillips
I’m getting scared
Mary Phillips
Where are you?
Mary Phillips
5 more minutes?
Mary Phillips
You said you’ll be in 10 minutes
Mary Phillips
But it’s already 10:35pm
Cris Scott
But you said to bring eggs!
Mary Phillips
Cris, someone broke the vase in my bedroom!
Mary Phillips
I think he is in our bedroom
Cris Scott
Go and hide somewhere
Cris Scott
And call the cops
Mary Phillips
I’m calling them
Cris Scott
First you go and hide somewhere where he would not able to find you
Mary and Cris. Both are worried at this time
The scene change. Mary’s calling the cops
Police inspector
Hello, this is The NYC Police Department, how may I help you ma’am?
Mary Phillips
Some intruder came inside my house
Mary Phillips
I’m scared and my husband is not there with me right now
Police inspector
Don’t worry ma’am
Police inspector
We’re coming in 1 minute
Police inspector
Just hold on!
The cops are on their way
The scene change. Cris and Mary
Mary Phillips
The cops are gonna arrive in 1 minute.
Mary Phillips
And where are you?
Cris Scott
I’ll be in 2 minutes
Cris Scott
Don’t worry girl
Cris Scott
Nothing will happen!
Mary Phillips
Just come first
Mary Phillips
I can’t live without you!!
At this moment, the cops arrived at Mary’s residence
Police inspector
We’re from the Police Department
Police inspector
Could you please open the door!!
Mary Phillips
Yeah coming
But some one was standing in front of the main door
Police inspector
Ma’am what happens?
Mary Phillips
The Criminal is at my door. Standing with a knife
Police inspector
Don’t worry ma’am
Police inspector
We’ll break the door!!
The police tried to break the door, then, the Criminal tried to stab him with the knife!!
The Inspector tried to fight with him, but he stabbed him in his chest and the inspector fainted.
Mary Phillips
Sir, are you there?
The scene change. Mary and Cris
Mary Phillips
You came already???
Cris Scott
I’ll be there in 20 seconds
Mary Phillips
Oh come on, the Criminal stabbed the police man.
Cris Scott
Just hide somewhere
Cris Scott
I don’t want to lose you!!!!
Mary Phillips
Oh I LOVE YOU CRIS!!!
While she was finding new place to hide, the Criminal saw her and tried to kill her
Mary Phillips
He’s following me!!!!
Mary Phillips
I am scared
Cris Scott
Wait... just run
Cris Scott
I am at the parking
Just after that, the Criminal caught her and tried to stab her. But, then Cris comes and hits him with the hammer.
Then he falls down on the ground.
Later the police department comes and takes the Criminal.
He was the Psycho who like to kill people. Especially, this girls who are alone living at their home.
03.24.2023 The Inspector who came to help her was admitted to the nearby hospital
Police inspector
Oh, is everything alright?
Mary Phillips
Yeah, thank you sir for helping me out
Police inspector
By the way, how did you caught him
Cris Scott
I’m her husband and I can right after he stabbed you and tried to kill Mary.
Police inspector
Oh, you did a great job gentlemen. Thank You for saving my life and my carrier.
Police inspector
I hope that psycho will sentenced death.
Mary Phillips
I hope so...
And the Psycho is in jail and he is sentenced for 3 months.
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