the storyline is good tbh, but author san I think that you need to work on your English or just use the auto-correct option. To reduce spelling mistakes and instead of you for fl use she/her. We are not playing an otome game to consider fl/ml as us. The second thing is that, according to your description, ml is a playboy. And tbh, I am not a fan of playboys in fact I always try to avoid reading stories where ml are playboys, and there are many readers outside with the same mindset as mine therefore I would recommend you to use playboy tag to avoid any negative comments. Please don't get me wrong, I am simply expressing my point of view, the storyline is decent, a little bit of work is required on fl's character, make her strong and independent not weak and timid. We are fed up of weak fls. thank you!
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the storyline is good tbh, but author san I think that you need to work on your English or just use the auto-correct option. To reduce spelling mistakes and instead of you for fl use she/her. We are not playing an otome game to consider fl/ml as us. The second thing is that, according to your description, ml is a playboy. And tbh, I am not a fan of playboys in fact I always try to avoid reading stories where ml are playboys, and there are many readers outside with the same mindset as mine therefore I would recommend you to use playboy tag to avoid any negative comments. Please don't get me wrong, I am simply expressing my point of view, the storyline is decent, a little bit of work is required on fl's character, make her strong and independent not weak and timid. We are fed up of weak fls.
thank you!
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