Grieved
Seizing the opportunity, Seth moved with lightning speed, his eyes ablaze with determination, he wielded his sword with a skill honed through years of training and battle.
The blade gleamed in the flickering light of the flames, its sharp edge catching the fire's glow
The clash of steel against fur echoed through the forest, mingling with the creature's anguished cries as Seth's sword found its mark.
Again and again, he struck with unwavering determination.
Seth raised the sword each movement was precise and calculated, his muscles flexing with controlled power as he prepared to deliver a fatal blow to the creature.
With a final, resounding blow, Seth drove the sword deep into the heart of the wolf, the flames engulfing its form in a blaze of fire and fury
For a brief moment, the forest was bathed in an ethereal light, the flames casting long, flickering shadows upon the ground.
As the flames died down and the forest covered in smoke, darkness and silence.
Seth stood victorious amidst the smoldering remains of the creature, his eyes shining with triumph.
With a sense of finality, he withdrew his sword from the charred husk of the wolf, its blade still glowing faintly with the heat of battle.
Seth (ML)
*turned to check on Tia*
Celestia Florence (Tia) (FL)
*laid still amidst the ashes and fallen leaves*
Her once vibrant features now appears pale and ghostly.
Seth (ML)
*heart plummeted with dread*
Rushing to her side, Seth knelt beside her, his hands trembling, afraid of hurting her, he gently brushed aside her disheveled hair and gown to reveal the extent of her injuries.
His breath caught in his throat as he took in the sight of her bloodied and bruised body.
Seth (ML)
I... am..late
*moist eyes*
Seth (ML)
I am sorry
*crying*
Tears flooded his eyes, but Tia remained still, her breathing shallow, her pulse weak.
Panic surged through Seth's veins as he realized the gravity of her condition, his heart aching with fear and sorrow.
Seth (ML)
*sobbing*
Please wake up!
He grieved; his voice raw with pain.
Authy
Are you liking the story?
Authy
Like can you give me some feedback please? 🥺
Authy
Is it becoming too descriptive and lacking dialogues???
Authy
I'm fine if you think it's in intial phase with not much going on but does it sound very boring with a stereotypical ML?
Authy
Are you comfortable with their kiss scenes or I should skip them?
Authy
I'm trying to make it interesting
Authy
I can't find suitable photos (I wish to use suitable for blonde FL & Black/brown ML) I wish to keep consistency in their descriptions and pictures
Authy
This story will be in two parts, I plan to keep first part purely for leads to get to get together before going for main plot
Authy
I want to write more interactions between them or should I shorten it and proceed to the main plot?
Comments
Mei (I love drama)
No no plz no shortening.. we like their conversation.. and kissing scenes aren't bad.. Although he forced kisses on her, he didn't go overboard.. So it's still alright..
2024-06-01
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Mei (I love drama)
Yes authy.. And the vocabulary and language is making it even more amazing 🤩
2024-06-01
1
Astrid
This is a great story /Smile//Smile/
2024-05-31
1