author...this tym i am.saying respectfully...it dont even look like rebirth stories anymore...rebirth stories gives flashback in between that maintain the spark of the story n keep the readers engaged...n the truth unfold slowly slowly...now that u have unfold every secrets...everyone will think there is no need to read further. .as after their lovey dovey era end...they will somehow get killed n find each other in another lyf....every one will think its predicatable n will loose intrest....coz its not intresting anymore ...you can guess that by the decreasing no of likes in each episode...see the no of likes earlier n now...i m.not discouraging or disrespecting u....i m.just saying ...it dont look like original.storyline anymore....n it is not doing its work of keeping reader engage in ur story...ur story line was dope...but somehow it looks like it lost its track....rest ..if u wanna abuse or disrespect me its ur wish....i know how it feel to not get same response on story as u thought while writing it..i went through the phase too..my 2nd story was like that too...so plzz dont think i m discouraging u...rest ur wishhh
2024-11-10
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Tresure_vkook ๐ฐ๐ฏ
Yeah it's hard to find what we want in Instant ๐๐๐
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author...this tym i am.saying respectfully...it dont even look like rebirth stories anymore...rebirth stories gives flashback in between that maintain the spark of the story n keep the readers engaged...n the truth unfold slowly slowly...now that u have unfold every secrets...everyone will think there is no need to read further. .as after their lovey dovey era end...they will somehow get killed n find each other in another lyf....every one will think its predicatable n will loose intrest....coz its not intresting anymore ...you can guess that by the decreasing no of likes in each episode...see the no of likes earlier n now...i m.not discouraging or disrespecting u....i m.just saying ...it dont look like original.storyline anymore....n it is not doing its work of keeping reader engage in ur story...ur story line was dope...but somehow it looks like it lost its track....rest ..if u wanna abuse or disrespect me its ur wish....i know how it feel to not get same response on story as u thought while writing it..i went through the phase too..my 2nd story was like that too...so plzz dont think i m discouraging u...rest ur wishhh
2024-11-10
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Tresure_vkook ๐ฐ๐ฏ
Yeah it's hard to find what we want in Instant ๐๐๐
2024-12-01
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taebear๐ปโค๏ธ๐ฐkookie
wow ๐๐๐๐
2024-11-11
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