as a chat story critique, I'm in this field for the last 4 years. i analyse that your story is really good, but chapters are pretty short 🤌💖🌱🌸 bro... it's lovely. You know i have stopped reading stories in this app because there is vhii ghiissi pitti story , but your story is one of the stories I'm still using this app
2024-12-24
11
Prishay Khan
yeh Kia barish MN kiss k bad direct ghr kaise AA Gia 🫤 or episodes choti Hoti ja RI hain q 😭 Hume Tou Pasand AA RI na phir q nhi updates ho RI 🥺
2024-12-24
2
Suma
you should Stop writing..... it's better than writing 4-5 lines after taking 1 week to update
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as a chat story critique, I'm in this field for the last 4 years. i analyse that your story is really good, but chapters are pretty short 🤌💖🌱🌸
bro... it's lovely. You know i have stopped reading stories in this app because there is vhii ghiissi pitti story , but your story is one of the stories I'm still using this app
2024-12-24
11
Prishay Khan
yeh Kia barish MN kiss k bad direct ghr kaise AA Gia 🫤 or episodes choti Hoti ja RI hain q 😭 Hume Tou Pasand AA RI na phir q nhi updates ho RI 🥺
2024-12-24
2
Suma
you should Stop writing.....
it's better than writing 4-5 lines after taking 1 week to update
2024-12-24
5