this story is good but author-shi this is a chat story.. u wrote it as a novel.. it's really difficult to read all those paragraphs.. hope u can write more dialogues in next stories.. if I'm I'm novels why will I be here in chatstory... I'm just saying.. I'm not criticizing or anything... I'm just saying that is because I love your story..
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Annu💜
this story is good but author-shi this is a chat story.. u wrote it as a novel.. it's really difficult to read all those paragraphs.. hope u can write more dialogues in next stories.. if I'm I'm novels why will I be here in chatstory... I'm just saying.. I'm not criticizing or anything... I'm just saying that is because I love your story..
2025-08-12
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Prava😺😺
delulu
2025-01-26
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mystery💀
in real life not in fanfiction man
2024-06-05
5