no their is no need of improvement your creativity is just amazing I can only say that you are a hard worker and your hard work is paying off, I love your work it's super awesome
Reader from mtn community
2020-07-23
0
Star
When I was reading , I was lost in this story because you are expressing the emotions and feelings very well. Keep up your work. I think , you are going to attract more readers and have the capacity to write more .
~. reader from MTN community
2020-07-13
1
☆Mr.Handsome☆《MDC-H 》Boy
In this novel sometime I felt it interesting but again I lost my interest. Really it was a mixture feeling..I like cassy in this novel..The way author described the character is amazing. same goes for Toma..It is a nice work..but need to improve more... Readers from MTN community
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otaku /army forever ( MTNP)
no their is no need of improvement
your creativity is just amazing
I can only say that you are a
hard worker and your hard work is
paying off, I love your work
it's super awesome
Reader from mtn community
2020-07-23
0
Star
When I was reading , I was lost in this story because you are expressing the emotions and feelings very well. Keep up your work. I think , you are going to attract more readers and have the capacity to write more .
~. reader from MTN community
2020-07-13
1
☆Mr.Handsome☆《MDC-H 》Boy
In this novel sometime I felt it interesting but again I lost my interest. Really it was a mixture feeling..I like cassy in this novel..The way author described the character is amazing. same goes for Toma..It is a nice work..but need to improve more...
Readers from MTN community
2020-07-12
1