story is good but I think there was no need to change the ml I mean title of the story is based on Hellion I think and fl is send to novel in because she wanted to give happy ending to hellion but nothing changed he still get sad ending I agree he played with fl but later he realised his mistake and his feelings for her was true author you can make him suffer for his mistakes what's the point of her going in novel everyone gets happy ending expect hellion his ending was same as before anyway it's just my point of view story is good no offense to anyone or author
2024-11-25
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pearl 💞
it's really good story 🥰 i really like this story of yours 😍😍 I'm really happy for fl finally she got happiness 😊😊
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MARIE GRACE
story is good but I think there was no need to change the ml I mean title of the story is based on Hellion I think and fl is send to novel in because she wanted to give happy ending to hellion but nothing changed he still get sad ending I agree he played with fl but later he realised his mistake and his feelings for her was true author you can make him suffer for his mistakes what's the point of her going in novel everyone gets happy ending expect hellion his ending was same as before anyway it's just my point of view story is good no offense to anyone or author
2024-11-25
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pearl 💞
it's really good story 🥰 i really like this story of yours 😍😍 I'm really happy for fl finally she got happiness 😊😊
2024-09-23
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cute
nice story I love 💕😘 it
2024-06-16
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