author Don't be mad ....even I am not good in English or writing novel but please can you write Thier dialogue separately like this Kim "hey hhii" min "hii" coz it's Will be easy to understand...I said this because I got confused while reading..... sorry if got mad
and you can use next day rather than tomorrow day ...
i love your story and your storyline and it's my first novel (not chat story) which I read this much I usually don't read novel but your novel got my attention so .....and your story is fabulous hope you won't feel bad and you will improve .....
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Sneha Sharma
I think jimmy takes min
2021-11-25
4
Park
it's very good
author Don't be mad ....even I am not good in English or writing novel but please can you write Thier dialogue separately like this
Kim "hey hhii"
min "hii"
coz it's Will be easy to understand...I said this because I got confused while reading..... sorry if got mad
and you can use next day rather than tomorrow day ...
i love your story and your storyline and it's my first novel (not chat story) which I read this much I usually don't read novel but your novel got my attention so .....and your story is fabulous hope you won't feel bad and you will improve .....
thank you
2021-03-14
1
ayy
ayy
ditunggu ya author❤
2020-07-06
0