How old is this person writing this book? Everyone speaks in the third person and steal. Saying Mommy, Mommy, Sophia, why not just Sophia? And colin, the maid made instead of giving her a name, how ridiculous
2025-06-03
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Judy Okano
I also agree. I also think no one is proofreading this story because genders are getting mixed up, such as he or she. Her sibling is her brother, but times, he's referred to as her sister.
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Monalisa Davis
How old is this person writing this book? Everyone speaks in the third person and steal. Saying Mommy, Mommy, Sophia, why not just Sophia? And colin, the maid made instead of giving her a name, how ridiculous
2025-06-03
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Judy Okano
I also agree. I also think no one is proofreading this story because genders are getting mixed up, such as he or she. Her sibling is her brother, but times, he's referred to as her sister.
2025-06-19
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Pauline
This book is getting better
2025-05-25
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