It was good big there were a lot of confusing things. A lot of sentences were incorrect and some of the names were mixed up. There were times when the sentences said he or she and it should have been she or he. I am guessing that was not originally written in English because of the way some of the sentences are. It was not proof read after translation.
2025-05-07
3
Candy Davidson
I normally don’t like love stories but this one was exceptional! Happy ever after is always good. Even if the writer misspoke on he/she and the like. Even so it was a very good story.
2025-05-10
0
Vivia Robinson
in last few chapters you miss putting he for she and said her father walked her down Church aisle but her father's in prison so should said father in-law
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Kimberly
It was good big there were a lot of confusing things. A lot of sentences were incorrect and some of the names were mixed up. There were times when the sentences said he or she and it should have been she or he. I am guessing that was not originally written in English because of the way some of the sentences are. It was not proof read after translation.
2025-05-07
3
Candy Davidson
I normally don’t like love stories but this one was exceptional! Happy ever after is always good. Even if the writer misspoke on he/she and the like. Even so it was a very good story.
2025-05-10
0
Vivia Robinson
in last few chapters you miss putting he for she and said her father walked her down Church aisle but her father's in prison so should said father in-law
2025-05-08
0