Chapter 1 continue

...We all entered the room in a single file line the tall scary man pointed at each other beds and said each of our names." Listen you humans there are a few ground rules" the tall scary man said . "The basement is off limits at all times" he says and continues "Master does not like anyone snoopy or getting into things that there not supposed to be". "Now all of you rest up there is going to be a long day tomorrow". The tall scary man walked out the room but before he left he said "you guys may call me maximus ". I sat on the bed and it creaked. I looked down to the floor and a rat scurried past my feet . I scanned the room , there was a window, the beds, the door that led out into the hallway, but that was all the was in the room. I stood up and stretched my long legs and pulled my blonde hair up into a...

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so this is what I wanna rea write but I will post the really story line when I type it out on here I'm not sure which one is better

now what I have already typed

     The Man standing in the doorway says " dinner is always served at five pm do not be late chief wont be happy if your late". " Have a goodnight," he says with a grin and disappears.

         I heard the others start whispering to eachother. Some of them headed out of the room to explore the place. I sat down and grabbed my notepad. I've been working on this case for a while now after my partner milo went missing. The last place people saw him was here . That's why I will say here as long as it takes untill I find out what happened to him .Milo has been missing for two months now and he had been working on the case of the ten teenagers who went missing last december. The last place anyone saw those teens was here at the Inn. So I have been sent on a special mission to figure out what strange things are happening at this Inn. And I hope it will finally put my mind to ease if i solve this and find out what happened to my partner.

I felt a slight tap on my shoulder and turned my head. Shocked, I saw the red haired boy standing there.

" Hi I'm james" he says holding out his hand.

Taking his hand I say " hi james it's nice to meet you I'm sarah".

"Nice to meet you Sarah" he says with a polite smile.

For another minute he stood there then he turned around and walked off. I grabbed my phone to see if I had missed any calls and it turns out there is no signal here.

I will make sure to update soon this is still a work in progress ~Bat

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~Bat

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