I really enjoyed the plot of the story and would recommend it, but me personally it just really bugged me that Nina immediately surrendered to Maximiliano from one day where she couldn’t stand him to the next where she did everything he said. If i were in a situation like this I don’t think I could ever forgive what he said and did. I feel like she deserved better even if she did end up with him but at least not so soon and easily. And him calling her little and doll just aggravated me lol she wasnt a little girl and it just seemed belittling. Aside from that i did think it was a great story Great job!
2025-05-15
3
Zenora
What got me was the dad sent away and was still cheating. Audacity to bring the woman he has been sleeping with to get his wife back. Good thing she was monitoring him. Now that’s sad and glad she found love.
2025-05-16
0
Cathy Scheirer
great story and didn't have 1,000 plus chapters like the one I am reading.now
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lisbet
I really enjoyed the plot of the story and would recommend it, but me personally it just really bugged me that Nina immediately surrendered to Maximiliano from one day where she couldn’t stand him to the next where she did everything he said. If i were in a situation like this I don’t think I could ever forgive what he said and did. I feel like she deserved better even if she did end up with him but at least not so soon and easily. And him calling her little and doll just aggravated me lol she wasnt a little girl and it just seemed belittling. Aside from that i did think it was a great story
Great job!
2025-05-15
3
Zenora
What got me was the dad sent away and was still cheating. Audacity to bring the woman he has been sleeping with to get his wife back. Good thing she was monitoring him. Now that’s sad and glad she found love.
2025-05-16
0
Cathy Scheirer
great story and didn't have 1,000 plus chapters like the one I am reading.now
2025-05-12
6