The horrifying discovery

...As they all walk into the woods everyone waves goodbye Luna: ugh we haven't seen anything not even a track. Mia: ( whispers) you need to be quieter when talking if not it could hear us. Luna: we don't even know what it is what Lemon got on her computer is a bunch of bull crap. Howler: rules his eyes you will be sorry Luna: why's that we have over 30 cops on are side what could it possibly do. Mia: don't jinx it. Luna: fine ( rolls eyes) Howler: ok let's set camp here. Everyone setting up Mia: (sets the dead cow on a tall branch pulls it up to 10 ft in the air)their all done walks over to howler. Luna: why here were like 6ft away from the entrance. Howler: because if something happens to us we can run out of here and at least spare most of us. Get it now or does your peanut for a brain not comprehend what Im saying (rolls eyes) Luna: why you (gets hushed mid way) Mia (whispers) do you hear that Luna: no I don't hear noth...wait nothing making any noise that only means on thing ( looks at howler) Howler: their is something huge here that's scaring all the animals (signals to everyone to be silent and to hide) Mia: ( whispers ) what is that smell looks at Luna and Howler to see them pale white as a gost (looks ahead to see what they were seeing) oh God save us all As a huge wolf like creature or deer like creature emerges from the brambles and bunches of bushes it looked at the dead cow and started tearing it off the tree and swallowed it hole as chunks of blood and fat fall from his mouth some cops started throwing up and some nearly screamed when one cop got up to run ...

...Luna, Howler, and Mia: ( they all shout ) nooo you idiot you need to run as fast as possible. the poor cop ran and ran near the end when something huge knocks him into a tree were he coughed huge amounts of blood he tried getting up one the creature quickly snatched him bye the head and swallowed him whole it licks it's lips and stares at were the others were. Howler: ( whispers) s*** it knows we're here he screwed us all. he signals to them to sneak were they are 10 cops crawled to the others in command and made it but the others not so well the creature runs back to were the cow was and started stocking toward the left and then as it got closer to the 9 cops left back their sceams. Howler: (whispers ) sadly noo the creature starts picking them off one bye one and tearing them apart the last 10 couldn't move they were disgusted and horrified Howler: (signals the 10 that were with him and Luna and Mia to crawl to the exit with them in the back). as they were slowly making it to the exit they heard the ear piercing screams and cry's for help they were helpless all they could do was keep moving and hope the creature does not hear them and stays contented with the people they selfishly left behind the 10 cops horrified disgusted and sad were crawling untill they made it out they ran to their houses and locked their doors Howler: we we (starts crying) we left our comrades to that creature just so we could escape we are horrible people were supposed to be cops not villains who use their own people for bait why why crying super hard. Luna ( starts crying) I I sentence my comrades to death because of my emotional actions. Luna( hears gun shot )(looks for Mia ) Mia Mia Howler: ( looks around noo ( screams ) MIA NOOO ( tries to run in the forest) Luna: grabs him and says no we can't. Howler looks at Luna huff huff ( screams) ahhhh my poor sister why did you not make it ( starts crying) Luna: (helps him to the bosses house) In her mind ( I did as boss told me he should be proud of me now ) ( pretends to cry ) noo mia! arrives at the bosses house knocks (Opens door)...

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