Chapter 2 Where is Eric?

...~Next Morning~...

Well i remember he went zoakin city for the studies. So i guess i have an idea where to search for him..

...~After 1 hour (packing)~...

"Mom-"

"where are you going this early morning?"

"Mom i was about to say, i am going to zoakin city to look for Eric"

"zoakin city!? isn't it so far?"

"No mom it's about 360 kilometres"

"hm.how many days will u stay?"

"i am going to meet him after many days so i would like to stay for some days"

"hm"

"Okay then mom ll get going'

"Safe journey, call me once you reach"

"yeah"

So after telling mom i left..andi reached at night so i thought of resting tonight ina hotel cuz finding him would take long since i don't know his address.

...~Next Morning~...

I knew his school college name, so i went to meet school arranger. And guess what they said he dont study here, i asked about his address but they said they don't know that, i asked if anyone there who knows about his whereabouts, they said they dont know that either. it felt strange i tried asking in some other colleges too but they said there's no child with that identity i gave, i finalized to ask in the police station, they took identity of his from me, and said they'll let me know soon, i had no other choice but to go to hotel back being disappointed, i thought for sometime how can he dissapear like this, his phone number says it's not valid anymore, his school says they have no records of him, nobody knows about his whereabouts, thats so strange. I agree he was an introvert but it's not like he don't even have a single friend, someone at least.

Then a thought came to my mind that he might have some medical records right! he might have gone to hospital someday, i couldn't wait for the police's information so i directly went to some hospitals, i asked in some of them they kept saying there's no person's record with the information i gave, at last i went to an hospital where they said there were 3 people admitted with the name Eric Christopher,

Then i said "Eric Christopher age 18? do you have his record?"

They said. "18 years old? No, we have records of Eric of 14 year and 27 year, we don't have any records of the person you said"

After hearing what they said I got disappointed again, where i found a trace of hope that also lost. then i thought it there was a boy admitted of 14 year old this could be that he never got any disease to be admitted for 5 years...

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kate MTN (R)(P)

kate MTN (R)(P)

The story, the writing style is is awesome. but the problem is with syntax. do a check on the punctuation. Try make a short paragraph. instead of only telling all in pov, Try to include the conversation. that will make it more relatable.

2021-09-07

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☆Gauri☆MTNp☆Inf☆

☆Gauri☆MTNp☆Inf☆

The paragraph are too big like divide it in parts in that way it'll look good and trying using full stops,I mean small sentences your sentences are too big it is like you ended the whole paragraph in 1 line...it don't look good like this...But the story is good and progressing well..!

~Reader From MTN Community

2021-09-02

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