Girl you need to write more stories longer like this!!
2021-09-28
1
•B A J I - K U N•
ehehhe~~
2021-09-05
3
Silver
You're narration is absolutely good but I think you should focus more on the words... like b/w bed and bad, than and then.... your writing is absolutely hot but correcting these kind of errors makes your readers much more comfortable while reading it.
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Kaye Crumley
Girl you need to write more stories longer like this!!
2021-09-28
1
•B A J I - K U N•
ehehhe~~
2021-09-05
3
Silver
You're narration is absolutely good but I think you should focus more on the words... like b/w bed and bad, than and then.... your writing is absolutely hot but correcting these kind of errors makes your readers much more comfortable while reading it.
2021-08-14
1