There is so much confusion in your story. You have Ahki parents being arrested yet they are still at home it's so confusing that I am unable to explain it to you. The story should be rewritten from the start. You should find a a professional writer and a editor.
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Axcella Zed
There is so much confusion in your story. You have Ahki parents being arrested yet they are still at home it's so confusing that I am unable to explain it to you.
The story should be rewritten from the start. You should find a a professional writer and a editor.
2022-05-12
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