The story is ok but it really needs more work put into it for character development. Good stories aren’t based solely on conversation but the build up and history within each character. The descriptions provided by the authors give us readers an entire world to imagine and explore and unless it’s provided properly, no amount of conversation can be truly fulfilling.
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Bridget ♡
yesss
2024-02-19
0
kiyomi
anybody else think Steve is sus
2022-09-11
5
RedSpiderLily
The story is ok but it really needs more work put into it for character development. Good stories aren’t based solely on conversation but the build up and history within each character. The descriptions provided by the authors give us readers an entire world to imagine and explore and unless it’s provided properly, no amount of conversation can be truly fulfilling.
2022-07-01
1