It's been two days already, Adan's father in law trapped him into the maze. it was hard for him to find the truth. But Zoey was so normal and she even didn't put on a shy awkward face when Adan was around
He felt so relieved now. there would be no more problems in the company and Zoey would not feel awkward around him and was so sweet. It wasn't like she was not sweet before but recently they really look like a couple.
It was already passed 8 pm. When the door knocked by Adan, Zoey rushed to open the door. it was so nice to feel the warmth from her husband. Yeah she knew she had been taking advantage of his condition but she didn't want to regret her married life after the divorce
she wanted to give herself a second chance to cherish the time with Adan. If he wanted to hate her after regaining his memories, she no more care about that. Only memories of the person come with us till the end of our life.
why is there a lot of off side paragraphs but less dialogues for the characters...if u like to write off side paragraphs then its better to write a novel than a chat story....cuz chat story's sole purpose is to give dialogues to the characters and using off side just to clear the confusions by explaining a little...but your whole story contains maximum off side dialogues and less character dialogues which makes it kinda boring....so please don't do this in chat story...if you want to explain the scene please write it in novel cuz that's the difference between a novel and a chat story.... you didn't do this in the first chapter but as the story line gradually progressed you started giving less dialogues to characters...i m kinda bored🙂
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someoneyeetmeaway
why is there a lot of off side paragraphs but less dialogues for the characters...if u like to write off side paragraphs then its better to write a novel than a chat story....cuz chat story's sole purpose is to give dialogues to the characters and using off side just to clear the confusions by explaining a little...but your whole story contains maximum off side dialogues and less character dialogues which makes it kinda boring....so please don't do this in chat story...if you want to explain the scene please write it in novel cuz that's the difference between a novel and a chat story.... you didn't do this in the first chapter but as the story line gradually progressed you started giving less dialogues to characters...i m kinda bored🙂
2022-08-04
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𝗖𝗔𝗟𝗟𝗜𝗦𝗧𝗔🍁
more about them🥺
2022-03-27
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Mrs.luke [𝘼𝙇𝙄𝙀𝙉]
more please please
2022-03-27
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